[Green] Annual report, short and long

[gbanz42 at suddenlink.net]

Dawn,

   You've done a fantastic job at completing these two reports Frankly, I think it's unlikely that many people will read the longer report.

     My only suggestions on the longer report are:

         -Add page numbers

         -In the brine-waste section you have "an moratorium."

         -Add your name at the bottom as author

         -In the brine-section you might add the information I just sent--Washington County is #1 in the number of barrels of injected brine waste in the state.

     Short report:

           -Jim Grecni's name is misspelled

           -Add your name  as author

           -Good that you kept it to one page


---- Dawn Hewitt via Green <green at fuusm.org> wrote: 
> Dearest Green friends,
> 
> As promised, here are two documents, as promised. Although I am a writer and editor by profession, 1) I’m terrible at editing my own work, 2) especially immediately after I’ve written it, and 3) especially late at night. That is to say, there are almost certainly editorial improvements that can be made to both documents. But I can’t do that tonight. So, please forgive me if this isn’t my best work. Please send me your edits, including better ways of phrasing things I’ve included, as well as anything I’ve forgotten or skimped on. I’m a big fan of constructive criticism, so please, send it to me—by  noon Wednesday. I need to turn this in by 4:45 in order to be in time for the final Earth Day planning meeting.
> 
> Thank you, and good night!  —dawn
> 
> P.S. The long report is only three pages, so it’s not really that long. 
> 

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