[Green] Annual report, short and long

PATRICIA TROISI pdickeytroisi at aol.com
Tue Apr 12 07:15:09 CDT 2022


Both look good to me. Thank you very much! 

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> On Apr 11, 2022, at 10:49 PM, Dawn Hewitt via Green <green at fuusm.org> wrote:
> 
> Dearest Green friends,
> 
> As promised, here are two documents, as promised. Although I am a writer and editor by profession, 1) I’m terrible at editing my own work, 2) especially immediately after I’ve written it, and 3) especially late at night. That is to say, there are almost certainly editorial improvements that can be made to both documents. But I can’t do that tonight. So, please forgive me if this isn’t my best work. Please send me your edits, including better ways of phrasing things I’ve included, as well as anything I’ve forgotten or skimped on. I’m a big fan of constructive criticism, so please, send it to me—by  noon Wednesday. I need to turn this in by 4:45 in order to be in time for the final Earth Day planning meeting.
> 
> Thank you, and good night!  —dawn
> 
> P.S. The long report is only three pages, so it’s not really that long. 
> 
> <20220411 GSC annual report- long.docx>
> <GSC Short Report for April 24, 2022.docx>
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